tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post7183054903963906135..comments2023-11-26T23:02:26.288-05:00Comments on But Wait, There's More!: Loneliness HaikuShelleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08861427053408203618noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-79476952693727208132007-11-10T09:36:00.000-05:002007-11-10T09:36:00.000-05:00good job...pulled on some heart strings...takes a ...good job...pulled on some heart strings...takes a while to say goodbye. recordings...audio or video...mean we choose when. a mixed blessing, perhaps?meganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00752325087812245351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-83909972166956168202007-11-09T18:40:00.000-05:002007-11-09T18:40:00.000-05:00beautiful...yr 2nd ku is very close to home...let'...beautiful...yr 2nd ku is very close to home...let's just say after two years, she has yet to change the msg...his voice is still on the recording..little wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-10056019018330042272007-11-08T13:59:00.000-05:002007-11-08T13:59:00.000-05:00That second one is really touching. And painful.That second one is really touching. And painful.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-36984860268874302832007-11-07T11:54:00.000-05:002007-11-07T11:54:00.000-05:00a blur of birds... lovely.a blur of birds... lovely.Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-7108273143817067742007-11-06T21:07:00.000-05:002007-11-06T21:07:00.000-05:00The two haiku and the photo expressive of being le...The two haiku and the photo expressive of being left behind and the growing lonelieness. The birds flying away and the voice left of one who has gone on - each reflective othe other. Well done.Judy Brutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07424589887932194612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-15391831279938246752007-11-06T12:15:00.000-05:002007-11-06T12:15:00.000-05:00Both of these are so well done. The first is the ...Both of these are so well done. The first is the feeling of fall, watching all the birds heading off to leave us to face the cold winter alone, but the second... oh, my.Plain Foolishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02922112483988477841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-45103019891915098522007-11-05T21:08:00.000-05:002007-11-05T21:08:00.000-05:00Great, tangible loneliness!Great, tangible loneliness!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-65111954144710954002007-11-05T15:47:00.000-05:002007-11-05T15:47:00.000-05:00Deeply moving - the last one is so well put.Deeply moving - the last one is so well put.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-27171249829857909392007-11-05T15:39:00.000-05:002007-11-05T15:39:00.000-05:00All sad moments have their happier side.storks lea...All sad moments have their happier side.<BR/>storks leave<BR/>fisher rests on the Nile <BR/>storks arrive<BR/><BR/>http://ricardo-haiku.blogspot.com/Ričardashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06581761649674879488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-85943250641706308012007-11-05T14:53:00.000-05:002007-11-05T14:53:00.000-05:00Deeply painful. A constant reminder of losses and...Deeply painful. A constant reminder of losses and an future reminder of moving on.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-65635735307829951062007-11-05T14:37:00.000-05:002007-11-05T14:37:00.000-05:00Painful and truly, deeply lonely.Painful and truly, deeply lonely.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-61966409766341025672007-11-05T13:58:00.000-05:002007-11-05T13:58:00.000-05:00Ah, these are lovely. Distinct emotions, seasons i...Ah, these are lovely. Distinct emotions, seasons in each. Great!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-86395479596337587782007-11-05T09:12:00.000-05:002007-11-05T09:12:00.000-05:00I especially like the first one.I especially like the first one.Gerald (Ackworth born)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10972748175799683560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-19152447386310670702007-11-05T07:34:00.000-05:002007-11-05T07:34:00.000-05:00Oh the ache in the second one!Oh the ache in the second one!spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-61039596496586059982007-11-05T07:13:00.000-05:002007-11-05T07:13:00.000-05:00both beautiful...the second moves me to tears.both beautiful...the second moves me to tears.qualcosa di bellohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15107076097533430296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-60741594951701771762007-11-05T05:26:00.000-05:002007-11-05T05:26:00.000-05:00oh the second one gave me chills.....oh the second one gave me chills.....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-40749054495611396442007-11-05T03:54:00.000-05:002007-11-05T03:54:00.000-05:00the first is lovely, the photo too. The second is ...the first is lovely, the photo too. The second is very moving.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-13572479108825273692007-11-05T01:40:00.000-05:002007-11-05T01:40:00.000-05:00Both are very moving indeed.Both are very moving indeed.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-11085326455127132142007-11-04T23:36:00.000-05:002007-11-04T23:36:00.000-05:00Love that image "a blur of birds..."Love that image "a blur of birds..."Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-2221935966442307152007-11-04T23:35:00.000-05:002007-11-04T23:35:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.com