tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post9176522857907297596..comments2023-11-26T23:02:26.288-05:00Comments on But Wait, There's More!: Rain Haiku IIShelleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08861427053408203618noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811222.post-92079457999745599402008-04-04T19:48:00.000-04:002008-04-04T19:48:00.000-04:00No, I didn't read "shining up" the way you explain...No, I didn't read "shining up" the way you explain you meant it, at first. I read it as if you are standing looking out at the long shining wet ribbon of street stretched out before you, the moon hanging in the rain clouds at the far end. Both ways work I think? Nice one!Nancy Bea Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04833697697334243593noreply@blogger.com