November 20, 2006

Senses Haiku


The warm smell of bread,
a dark room lit by laughter:
thigh becomes pillow.


(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.
And, if you're up for a silly haiku-style suggestion for tonight's dinner,
pop on over to Bill Keagy's What's For Dinner site.)

8 comments:

  1. Anonymous10:07 AM

    A wonderful, sensory haiku, that really inspires all the senses at once! I love "dark room lit by laughter" :)

    Splendid!

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  2. I love "thigh becomes pillow..." As I read it I could not only see it, but feel it in memory. Thanks!

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  3. Anonymous4:52 PM

    What a lovely image and haiku for a cold damp winter night!

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  4. Anonymous5:24 PM

    What a pleasant sense poem! I can smell that bread!

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  5. Anonymous7:59 PM

    This is a great haiku...I can smell the bread now!

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  6. Anonymous8:58 AM

    Like the scene you capture. Lovely warm light in photo. Bloggity goodness is a delightful little phrase itself.

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  7. Anonymous9:38 AM

    Beautiful...breath-taking!

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