October 30, 2007

Change Haiku


even my feet
feel the change –
cold bathroom tile

(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.)
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12 comments:

  1. Clare4:16 PM

    Perfect! I laughed when reading this because I can totally relate -- my bathroom tile is freezing! Well done -- cool photo, too.
    :)

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  2. Anonymous5:29 PM

    I laughed too! I just got up to turn the heat on. Chilly up here in Maine.

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  3. sister AE7:35 PM

    We too just turned the heat on for the first time last night.

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  4. Tumblewords:11:03 PM

    ohmigosh - this is great - cold happens...love it!

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  5. Anonymous11:03 PM

    Fun take on the subject!

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  6. Crafty Green Poet4:12 AM

    this can be read at least two ways (colder weather or new flooring), excellent

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  7. Greggo1:39 PM

    haha! very clever! i know exactly what you mean.

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  8. qualcosa di bello2:54 PM

    time for socks!!! what a cute 'ku...

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  9. Isabel3:58 PM

    I feel it!

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  10. Nancy Bea Miller7:36 PM

    Excellent haiku! And boy do I love your tile! Same as in my Grandma's house.

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  11. little wing writer7:26 PM

    loved it!!!...i've already been wearing my slippers for awhile...

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  12. Anonymous1:58 PM

    Nice mix of image, haiku and concrete observation. Lovely.

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