dogwood blossoms
and the layered space
in between
(Mr. D's comment this morning:
"Tama, I never knew that climbing tree
was so beautiful.")
and the layered space
in between
(Mr. D's comment this morning:
"Tama, I never knew that climbing tree
was so beautiful.")
yes
ReplyDeleteindeed
yes
Nice one! ;-)
ReplyDeleteBTW The renga can be seen at the Poetry School participants' poetry page.
Go to and click top of the webpage on participants' poetry: The Poetry School
all my best,
Alan
Less than a month!
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition
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This is really lovely. I have been watching the trees and trying to see a haiku... this one is perfect!
ReplyDeletebeautiful the space you give to the space between
ReplyDeleteDear Friends, thank you so much for your kind words about this last haiku of the month of April.
ReplyDeleteI was hoping that writing one that I could stand to share every day for a month would limber up my haiku writing muscles, but instead I seem to be going through a bit of a drought... nice to have your support to lean on.