more rain
and a kitchen cricket —
autumn songs
(Image by Sarah MacMillan, via Flickr)
summer's end —
driveway stones
no longer sharp
(Warm thanks to the reader/writers
of haikuworld,
who treated these haiku with kindness)
and a kitchen cricket —
autumn songs
(Image by Sarah MacMillan, via Flickr)summer's end —
driveway stones
no longer sharp
(Warm thanks to the reader/writers
of haikuworld,
who treated these haiku with kindness)
beautiful!
ReplyDeleteleft me breathless...
xo
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Nice job. Better than the ones I was struggling to scribble.
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ReplyDeleteThey're great! ;-)
all my best,
Alan
The With Words Haiku Competition 2009
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