Roots/Connection Haiku
While we slept, the snow
dusted our walkway for prints:
Gaia's detective.
The snowclouds let go
and their burden becomes mine.
Time to sweep the walk.
The boxwood bushes
enjoy the attention while
they try on white coats.
(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.
Update: Now with photos!)
dusted our walkway for prints:
Gaia's detective.
The snowclouds let go
and their burden becomes mine.
Time to sweep the walk.
The boxwood bushes
enjoy the attention while
they try on white coats.
(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.
Update: Now with photos!)
posted by Shelley @ 8:38 AM
14 comments
14 Comments:
Nice snowy haiku, I really like the bushes in their white coats and the snow being Gaia's detective.
I liked "the snowclouds let go"... when you see snow clouds, it does look like they are full to bursting! Just lovely!
These were lovely Shelley and the second one made me chuckle.
Love these clever winter haiku! I'm smiling. Thanks ; )
the pictures couldn't be better...love it all.
These are lovely odes to winter - the first one is really creative.
Fun series. I really like this one:
The snowclouds let go
and their burden becomes mine.
Time to sweep the walk.
"While we slept, the snow
dusted our walkway for prints:
Gaia's detective."
I lovelovelove this - Blessed be!
*CSI addict*
Shelley,
I have had similar thoughts as you describe in your first. Very creative.
Also like "trying on white coats"
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beautiful! I love those snow photos. The third haiku is my favorite.
These made me smile - especially the first one.
I love the idea of the bushes trying on snow coats - lovely seried!
I love these! Haiku and photos!
These are SO clever! My favorite line is "their burden..."...brilliant :-)
(When are we gonna get snow! I NEED a snow day!!!)
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