August 21, 2007

Daybreak Haiku

I grasp my blanket
while the world rolls over

daybreak already?

~ ~ ~

the day's climb up the dunes

birds and their songs

~ ~ ~

Cutting the deck,
sea from sky

the sun's first light

(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.)


Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

"...while the world rolls over," I love that thought.

Clare said...

I also love the line "while the world rolls over" -- such a beautiful image that creates! And the birds and their songs are lovely -- the word "tracing" gives a really nice visual and feeling.

tumblewords said...

Great! I particularly like the idea of the daybreak cutting the deck - a fine visual!

megan said...

me too, me too...the world rolls over is a great collection of words!

OneBlueSoul said...

Great images. I especially like 'daybreak already?'