I grasp my blanket
while the world rolls over –
daybreak already?
~ ~ ~
Tracing
the day's climb up the dunes –
birds and their songs
~ ~ ~
Cutting the deck,
sea from sky –
the sun's first light
(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.)
while the world rolls over –
daybreak already?
~ ~ ~
Tracing
the day's climb up the dunes –
birds and their songs
~ ~ ~
Cutting the deck,
sea from sky –
the sun's first light
(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.)
5 comments:
"...while the world rolls over," I love that thought.
I also love the line "while the world rolls over" -- such a beautiful image that creates! And the birds and their songs are lovely -- the word "tracing" gives a really nice visual and feeling.
:)
Great! I particularly like the idea of the daybreak cutting the deck - a fine visual!
me too, me too...the world rolls over is a great collection of words!
Great images. I especially like 'daybreak already?'
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