August 30, 2007

Little Haiku


flustered chickadee
tail feathers akimbo
with each gust

chickadee
not flying but carried
by the storm

(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.
I mis-remembered the prompt,
so wrote about something small and pretty,
rather than tiny and pretty,
but what the heck.)


3 comments:

Greggo said...

great imagery in both of these. i can see the poor little fellers trying to steady themselves in the wind. :-)

Roswila said...

Really like both of these, but especially the first -- tail feathers akimbo -- fabulous image.

tumblewords said...

Nice images. I can see the little things working out passage with the invisible carrier...