and scrape the onions into the pot
with the back of my knife, hearing
the friend who taught me to protect my edges.
As I slip the soup into bowls I make out
the faint roar of a distant jet engine –
my lover imported the ladle from Germany,
slipping its stainless steel curves into her suitcase.
I cook with my mother’s dish towel over my shoulder,
listening for my grandmothers’ voices whispering up
from the recipes they wrote on blue-lined index cards.
(Thanks to Jillypoet for the 11-line challenge
and Read.Write.Poem for the spark ("ladle").
Tune in tomorrow for more piping hot content.)
and Read.Write.Poem for the spark ("ladle").
Tune in tomorrow for more piping hot content.)
2 comments:
I really, really like the sound in this poem! echoes, scrape, hearing my friend, the sound of "slip the soup into bowls"--that's onomatopeia--right? When something sounds like it is written.
I love kitchen poems, and this is a great one! Full of memory, visual...love it!
This made me cry!
I cook with echoes too.
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