September 23, 2008

Autumn Haiku

(Image by Subharnab Majumdar, via Flickr)


more rain
and a kitchen cricket —
autumn songs

(Image by Sarah MacMillan, via Flickr)

summer's end —
driveway stones
no longer sharp


(Warm thanks to the reader/writers
of haikuworld,
who treated these haiku with kindness)

3 comments:

Wendy said...

beautiful!
left me breathless...

xo
w

howard said...

Nice job. Better than the ones I was struggling to scribble.

Alan Summers said...

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They're great! ;-)

all my best,

Alan
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