May 26, 2016

peony blossoms
in slow-motion burst
you reach for my hand


Daniel Wilcox said...

Thanks for creating this vivid poem. I especially love
the line paradox of "slow-motion burst."

And the contrast similarity of the last line's emotion...

May I steal this? (Just kidding;-) I copied to my favorite poems.

Shelley said...

Thank you for your attention and kind comments, Daniel!