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Thanks for creating this vivid poem. I especially lovethe line paradox of "slow-motion burst."And the contrast similarity of the last line's emotion...May I steal this? (Just kidding;-) I copied to my favorite poems.
Thank you for your attention and kind comments, Daniel!
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Thanks for creating this vivid poem. I especially love
the line paradox of "slow-motion burst."
And the contrast similarity of the last line's emotion...
May I steal this? (Just kidding;-) I copied to my favorite poems.
Thank you for your attention and kind comments, Daniel!
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