Who will we be now?
Stayed or fled, living or dead,
Our world divided:
Heavy, and mangled past use.
Light, to be broken and strewn.
(More tanka at One Deep Breath.
More on Katrina here.)
Stayed or fled, living or dead,
Our world divided:
Heavy, and mangled past use.
Light, to be broken and strewn.
(More tanka at One Deep Breath.
More on Katrina here.)
9 comments:
Both the tanka and photograph are so powerful! Thanks for such an important reminder.
Very powerful poem to accompany a powerful photograph. Thanks for sharing your insight within your poem.
yes, excellent tanka and sentiment.
wow, this is great. I love the light line in particular
Wow! this says it all ... photo and tanka. Thanks!
Great tanka. An importnat message well portrayed.
Amazing! Excellent!!
Deeply touching.
Well done! Picture and tanka were powerful and full of emotion.
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