This week's prompt at One Deep Breath is "color(ful)" and despite this haiku's lack of obvious color, it sprung from that prompt... the events described in the body of this post, coupled with thinking about the way that color can signal surprise and change, led me here:
Melting ice cracks, then
slides, then tumbles off the roof –
cartwheeling towards spring.
It didn’t look like it was going to be a good day for spending time outside. Not only because of the weather (wet, grey, cold), but because I stayed up late last night watching TV at S's while we reassured each other that of course Monday would be a snow day.
That way lies trouble, friends.
That way lies trouble, friends.
Then the contrast between the outdoors and the riotous color and whirl of D’s cartwheels:
(Thanks to the people at One Deep Breath
and Thing-A-Day
for their continuing inspiration.)
and Thing-A-Day
for their continuing inspiration.)
6 comments:
You are right... I stayed up too late counting on a snow day too and got only a late opening which took away my prep time. Sigh. I ended up trying to work on a laptop on the dining room table, writing report cards while my kids ran amuck.
The trees were especially beautiful yesterday, you are right. I love the haiku and pictures!
P.S. got your card yesterday too - gorgeous!! What a stunning smile that boy has!
I see beautiful even in the winter of a leafless tree. This was very nice.
Your haiku and explanation are great and then the montage is an ah ha! moment, when the rambling course makes sense.
I'm glad you were able to get out and see the colors.
Fabulous - the link to "cartwheeling towards spring" in your terrific haiku and the photo of your son doing cartwheels. Well done!
I'm with Tara on this one- I loved the link up between the cartwheels!
Yea - nice! Thanks for sharing this.
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