August 07, 2007

Evening Haiku

Early August –
dusk lags back
to check on bedtime

(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.)


tumblewords said...

Clever haiku. The nights are folding in on us, for sure.

Jemima said...

Reasons to be glad I'm an adult, now I can stay up as late as I choose, it really used to bothered me when daytime and bedtime coincided during summer.

Christine said...

This is a smart take on the prompt! I really like it.

spacedlaw said...

This Haiku makes me miss the long evenings of Holland...