August 07, 2007

Evening Haiku

Early August –
dusk lags back
to check on bedtime

(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.)

4 comments:

tumblewords said...

Clever haiku. The nights are folding in on us, for sure.

Jemima said...

Reasons to be glad I'm an adult, now I can stay up as late as I choose, it really used to bothered me when daytime and bedtime coincided during summer.

Christine said...

This is a smart take on the prompt! I really like it.

spacedlaw said...

This Haiku makes me miss the long evenings of Holland...
Nice.
:)