October 30, 2007

Change Haiku


even my feet
feel the change –
cold bathroom tile


(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.)

12 comments:

Clare said...

Perfect! I laughed when reading this because I can totally relate -- my bathroom tile is freezing! Well done -- cool photo, too.
:)

Sandy said...

I laughed too! I just got up to turn the heat on. Chilly up here in Maine.

sister AE said...

We too just turned the heat on for the first time last night.

tumblewords said...

ohmigosh - this is great - cold happens...love it!

coconutannies said...

Fun take on the subject!

Crafty Green Poet said...

this can be read at least two ways (colder weather or new flooring), excellent

Greggo said...

haha! very clever! i know exactly what you mean.

qualcosa di bello said...

time for socks!!! what a cute 'ku...

WorkingWords100 said...

I feel it!

Nancy Bea said...

Excellent haiku! And boy do I love your tile! Same as in my Grandma's house.

LittleWing said...

loved it!!!...i've already been wearing my slippers for awhile...

Pearl said...

Nice mix of image, haiku and concrete observation. Lovely.