The moon and I,
silent on the boardwalk —
letting the waves speak.
(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.
Bet you weren't expecting a boardwalk poem
on January 7th! But it was t-shirt weather here today,
and last year, too, at this time
we were experiencing a weird heatwave.
Mr. D and I are worried about the Earth.)
silent on the boardwalk —
letting the waves speak.
(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.
Bet you weren't expecting a boardwalk poem
on January 7th! But it was t-shirt weather here today,
and last year, too, at this time
we were experiencing a weird heatwave.
Mr. D and I are worried about the Earth.)
18 comments:
such beautiful company on a silent boardwalk...thank you for sharing.
Oh, I can see the moon and hear the waves...very lovely haiga.
I worry about the Earth too but hopefully she will shake off all those destroying her.
A lovely picture in those few words. Delightful haiku!
Your words drew me into the scene and onto the boardwalk.
beautiful! I too worry about the earth
We're having strange weather as well. I,too, am worried about the planet. I could hear your closing line.
beautiful
the world will change whatever we do or don't do - let us live with it.
Lovely. To be in cahoots with the moon is a wonderful idea!
Writing in Faith
I also love to walk beside the ocean when it's too cold to swim. That's when the boardwalk is silent...
Beautiful.
Yes, this is so vivid and full of wonder!
sounds like a peaceful walk
you paint beautiful imagery with your words...nothing is quite like moonlight on waves
now that paints a very definite picture... i hope the waves spoke only words you needed to hear......
Yes! Delightful. The moon above a boardwalk? Sounds like heaven to me.
Lovely!
I would so love to sit there and watch the moon, from afar. I worry about the earth, too. :(
This feels extremely romantic.
Lovely.
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