April 30, 2008

dogwood blossoms
and the layered space
in between

(Mr. D's comment this morning:
"Tama, I never knew that climbing tree
was so beautiful.")



NaPoWriMo 08

5 comments:

Wendy said...

yes
indeed
yes

Alan Summers said...

Nice one! ;-)


BTW The renga can be seen at the Poetry School participants' poetry page.

Go to and click top of the webpage on participants' poetry: The Poetry School


all my best,

Alan
Less than a month!
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition

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Cloudscome said...

This is really lovely. I have been watching the trees and trying to see a haiku... this one is perfect!

Crafty Green Poet said...

beautiful the space you give to the space between

Shelley said...

Dear Friends, thank you so much for your kind words about this last haiku of the month of April.

I was hoping that writing one that I could stand to share every day for a month would limber up my haiku writing muscles, but instead I seem to be going through a bit of a drought... nice to have your support to lean on.