November 12, 2007

Belonging Haiga


autumn slides in,
defiantly belonging –
brown wedge in the green

(Thanks to the women of One Deep Breath
for their continuing inspiration.
And here I am, blogging about autumn
on the eve of the Winter Haiku 2007 blog's inagural posts!)


12 comments:

tumblewords said...

oh, yes, here it comes! Nice haiga!

paisley said...

got my first load of wood today... it is definitely here......

very nice......

spacedlaw said...

Not as defiant as BRAZEN!
:)
Very nice haiku and a perfect fit for the picture.

Crafty Green Poet said...

its definitely here!

Jo said...

Good one!

jem said...

Wow - well spotted. Its almost like the green segments are welcoming the brown, and waiting their turn to change. A good interpretation of the prompt.

qualcosa di bello said...

sometimes we belong whether wanted or not!

Glad said...

I love how autumn is defiant. Endings can be like that. Thank you!

Shelley said...

Friends, thank you for you kind comments. This picture was taken weeks ago, but was apparently waiting the One Deep Breath prompt.

spacedlaw, I like your suggestion... brazen is a great word!

Jem, I'm looking forward to your contributions to the winter haiku blog.

qualcosa di bello, you've got me thinking...

and glad, you're very welcome!

Cloudscome said...

Beautiful! I like that wedge of brown in the green. It does belong.

Clare said...

Very clever!! It's like a slice of chocolate cream pie sliding into a green salad -- the perfect meal! I love your haiku and photo -- perfect!
:)

Patois said...

Great ku for the prompt. "Brown wedge" is a great catch.